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[Thoughts] Fallen (A Really Lame Poem)
Okay, I'm about to leave for anime club, so I'm just doing a quick post to let you all know that I live. And, um, here's a really stupid, sappy poem I wrote last night. A certain roleplay reminded me that I'm a hopeless romantic, and then this just kinda rolled out of my brain. First and probably only draft; feel free to criticize the hell out of it.

Fallen

I fall further every day.

I want to know about her,
 and she wants to know about me.
Day by day we learn more,
 offer more,
 give and receive more,
 together.

She is beautiful, in every way.
Her outer appearance and her inner thoughts;
 her body, mind, heart, and soul.
When she cries, the world cries with her.
When she's happy, she lights up the earth.

I want to scoop her up in my arms
 and crush whatever tries to hurt her.
I want to be her sword and her shield,
 her anchor and her wings,
 her friend,
  confidant,
  partner,
  lover.

I fall further in love every day.

Update that doesn't suck forthcoming.

Feeling: indescribable indescribable

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Comments
eimajunknown From: eimajunknown Date: March 16th, 2005 06:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
it's not a bad poem. not at all. you should see some of my first drafts *shakes head*
sannalim From: sannalim Date: March 17th, 2005 07:13 am (UTC) (Link)
Aww, that's sweet. Good luck with her! :)
paradisacorbasi From: paradisacorbasi Date: March 17th, 2005 04:03 pm (UTC) (Link)
*starry eyed*

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww.

JWS flareup. I need chocolate now.

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